Screen Writing Task

On Jools's screen writing class, he gave us a task to write a place.
Evoke that place through writing it
1. evoke it through sounds, smells, size
2. evoke that same place through character
3. evoke thae same place through two characters

Here is my writing:

 

1. An old building in shool. The floor and stairs are made of wood. You can feel the smell of wood mingled with the dust. The space is very quite and dark. Some gypsum portrait and the painter's paraphernalia piled up in the waste of the classroom. It was full of dust, and not many people go into this building.

 

2. A student need to get some sculpture at the second floor of this building. So she went into the building. She push the door slightly, walked slowly to the stairs side. This place is quite dark, she feel a little bit scare about this place. She climbs stairs carefully and she can heard the stair groan from the old wood.

 

3.When she arrived at the second floor, some doves beside windows are fly away. She is so scared. She want to get out of this building. But when she go back to the stairs, it disappears. She run away want to find other ways to get out. So she tried every ways, but it seems that she always at the same place. It make her crazy. She started to cry. At that moment, one dove appears beside her and started to peck her hand and head.

 

I think this is a very interesting and useful way to create a place, we can add elements and characters of this place, so that we can enrich story and character's emotions.