Changed some detail about my script

Jools suggests me to add one scene， so that it can builds up a convincing contextual picture through the script.

The 5 key words is colourful, children's world, generation gap, believe, imagine.

The idea is about a little girl told her mother that she can see another colourful world through the pore that made by her hands.

In that world, sometimes, everything get bigger like through the magnifier. Sometimes, everything become multiple like through a kaleidoscope. This girl was very excited. She wanted to shared this vivid word to her mother. But her mother only can see the real word.

This is a story about believe and not believe things. I want to express that children and adults see the world is not the same, believe what you can see. Don't use your thoughts to destroy others world.

Here is my final script 《Your world, my world》

          EXT. ON THE ROAD. DAY

          A LITTLE GIRL is hopping,jumping and walking on the road

          with a big smile on her face. she use her hands form a hole

          and looking out through it. sometime, she look at the trees

          beside the road, sometimes she look at the blue sky and

          white clouds.

          INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY

          The Little Girl runs into the room.

                              LITTLE GIRL

                    Mom!!! Mom!!! Come and see! I can

                    see a colorful world through my

                    hands!

          The Little Girl's MOTHER comes out from the kitchen. The

          little girl pull her mother to sit down on sofa and shows

          the hole which is made by her hands to her mother.

                              LITTLE GIRL

                    Can you see it! the window become

                    bigger! look at this side, the

                    white wall become colorful.

          The little girl's mother looking through the hole that made

          by her daughter's hands.

                              MOM

                    What? What did you say? There is

                    nothing, just the white wall.

                              LITTLE GIRL

                    You can't see it? It's impossible.

          The little girl put her hands back and narrow her eyes, put

          the hole towards the white wall again. She look through the

          hole carefully.

                              LITTLE GIRL

                    Yeah, it is real, I can see the

                    white wall become red, er, now it

                    become pink. now it is yellow! It's

                    amazing, why you can't see it?

          The little girl shows the hole in front of her mother's eyes

          again.

                              LITTLE GIRL

                    Look, look carefully...Does the

                    white wall changed?

          The little girl's mother push the little girl's hands

          gently. Smile at her daughter,then she stand and walk to the

          table. she take the camera on the table and then she take a

          picture in front of the white wall, turn to look at the

          little girl. Show the picture to her daughter.

                              MOM

                    My dear, camera will not lie to us,

                    isn't it? See? The white wall

                    haven't change.There is no colorful

                    wall.

          The little girl twitched her mouth, frowned, nod her head

          gently. she did not seem pleased.

                              LITTLE GIRL

                    No, I believe I can see it. I'm

                    sure I saw it! I'll go outside to

                    see my world!

          The little girl run out of the room.

          EXT. IN THE PARK. DAY

          The little girl run to the park. She is looking through the

          hole that made by her hands. sometimes she is looking at the

          leaves on the tree, sometimes she is looking at the flowers

          beside the road. Her smile has turn back to her face

          gradually.

          She open her arms, take a deep breath and feel this world.

          She circled and smiled happily. The world around her begin

          to become vivid and colorful.

          EXT. IN THE PARK. DAY

          This scene takes place in a studio with a computer-generated

          background.

          The little girl is hopping,jumping and laughing in this

          world. Suddenly a bell ring come out. The little girl was

          shocked, she is looking back to the distance, but can't see

          anything. The bell continue to ringing. She looking at all

          directions nervously. The colorful world begin to lose

          color, become true appearance. The bell rang again.

          INT. BEDROOM. DAY

          The little girl open her eyes and she see the white ceiling.

          And then she turn off alarm clock. It was a dream, she seems

          a little disappoint. After a while, she turned around her

          eyes and sit up. She use her hands form a hole and looking

          out through it. The room become colorful again. She was

          shocked and get out of the bed immediately. Run to the

          living room.

          INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY

          The little girl come to the living room and take the camera

          on the desk. Then, she put the camera to the white wall and

          take a picture through the hole which is make by her hand.

          She find the white wall on the picture become colorful as well.